Too much plot summary and not enough focus on Phil. Also, serious narrative flow issues (people, things, and events are mentioned with no lead-in) and some lingering grammatical issues.
2601:8D:8702:EE40:3C62:2E3B:CB1E:F20C 13:13, April 28, 2018 (UTC)
I know about the inconsistent flow and grammatical issues. I haven't had serious time to focus and update the character pages and now I have even less time to work on the episode pages. As soon as I can, I'm going to work on the pages. PostApocalypticer (talk) 22:36, April 28, 2018 (UTC)